DRAFT: Untitled "USA1"

Discussion in 'Non CN Related Stories' started by joey67500, Aug 30, 2010.

  1. joey67500

    joey67500 Welcome to Menotah! Staff Member

    So this story is set in early 1941-1942 and is about a US infantrymen. Really not finished lol

    Few things:
    I do not give anyone the right to redistribute or reproduce or post in any way.
    I do not give anyone the right to use any of the content in the story.
    I do not give anyone the right to use this piece as a basis or storyboard.
    © 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010
    This is not finished yet.
    Rating: V1, L0, S0, I1.

    I swear these stories look sooo much longer in Microsoft word and when you type them out...

    This draft is named USA 1, since I have not yet decided on a name, and it's the first draft.

    DRAFT:

    I arrived at work after my short jog through the city and then proceeded into the police station. After a long day of college, I was on shift. I put on my uniform and my badge, and then took out my firearm. My pride and joy, my Smith & Wesson Military & Police; I loaded a round into all six cylinders. I told Chief Preston I would be going to the firing range in the basement. He replied
    “As long as you don’t shoot your eye out, youngster.” I ignored his comment and continued down to the basement. Once I arrived, I looked around, there was no one else in the firing range. I drew my pistol and fired off six rounds into the target, hitting the bulls-eye each time. Just then my friend and fellow student and officer, David Harrison came down.
    “Jack, I’ve got good news and bad news.”
    I turned and met his gaze, “What is it?”
    “We’ve been drafted into the Army.”
    “What’s the bad news?”
    “I’m in your unit.” He said with a grin.
     

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